Script, script, script!

There are sometimes when you are writing a script when you just have to go back to the drawing board and reshape material. This has been the case with this show. Plus prudent editing. Got way too much material for one hour and it's now the - "Is that important? Is that funny? Is that even about smoking?" phase. Add to that the "Do I need to write it all down or can I use notes and improv my way through it" idea then everything gets a bit complicated. Ah well!
Still to be written - cheery fun stuff like smoking rooms, smoking styles and controlling people with your lighter! and not so cheery stuff like cancer treatments and remission. It is part stand up, part drama after all. You can guess which is which.